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IMDB rating: 6.60 Plot: Seen-it-all New York detective Frank Keller is unsettled – he has done twenty years on the force and could retire, and he hasn’t come to terms with his wife leaving him for a colleague. Joining up with an officer from another part of town to investigate a series of murders linked by the lonely hearts columns he finds he is getting seriously and possibly dangerously involved with Helen, one of the main suspects. |
Actors: Pacino Al,Goodman John,Rooker Michael,Hickey William,Jenkins Richard,Calderon Paul,Canfield Gene,Joshua Larry,Spencer John,Phelan Mark,Crime,Thriller,Drama,
I need help writing a 12 bar blue's song.?
I need to write a 12 bar blue’s songs for music but I need help, Here’s an example:
I hate to see that evening sun go down
I hate to see that evening sun go down
‘Cause, my baby, he’s gone left this town
Feelin’ tomorrow like I feel today
If I’m feelin’ tomorrow like I feel today
I’ll pack my truck and make my give-a-way
St. Louis woman with her diamond ring
Pulls that man around by her
If it wasn’t for her and her
That man I love would have gone nowhere, nowhere
I got the St. Louis Blues
Blues as I can be
That man’s got a heart like a rock cast in the sea
Or else he wouldn’t have gone so far from me
I love my baby like a school boy loves his pie
Like a Kentucky colonel loves his mint’n rye
I love my man till the day I die
Btw this song was made by bessie smith.
Thanks
Which bit is it you need help with exactly?
Spekulus | Feb 06, 2010
i would love to help u but i really think u shoud come up with it on your own. jus write what u feel or whats on your mind…dont even worry about the # of bars or the rhyme scheme untill its finished then when the story sounds good go back through n correct it…u kno make it rhyme n make sure its only 12 bars and that it makes sence…btw please check out my youtube page n comment with an honest opinion and let me kno what i can do to improve with my music…thanks…
youtube.com/user/onlyGodcanjudgemi
btw make sure u spell it with an (i)^^^
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